Secret Heart for Onnanoko

Well, what can I say?

I adore the style you drew her in. The lineart is clean and isn't at all messy or scruffy. The shading is absolutely beautiful and flows together very well; they're no shadows or highlights in the wrong places.

You seem to have switched your shading around to a different style when doing the wings, and the style you used for them really stands out - in a good way, that is. My eyes are really drawn to them.

Moving onto the cloud, it seems...okay. Not bad, but not utterly amazing either. I don't know if it's just me, but some of her flank doesn't really look like it's sitting on the cloud from the way the shadows were positioned, so it seems as if she's only got her legs on there.

Overall, you drew her brilliantly and you've clearly worked hard on this! ^_^