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Blade Angel 1.0

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A work in progress of my second professional portfolio piece. Its a one-winged battle cyborg-girl. :/
Feedback is greatly appreciated!

Painted in photoshop cs5
art belongs to me
Image size
3549x2392px 8.78 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I have a few things to say about this piece. A few crits. I think her thigh needs to be wider, regardless of how thin you decide to keep the mechanical parts of her legs, also perhaps narrow her waist and/or widen her hips. Her hips I think are too norrow for the width of her shoulders, and her thigh is entirely too thin. But the mechanical bits look amazing. All I would suggest is some thin stark white highlights. The attention you've put into all the details is really impressive, though I don't lnow how I feel about the black shading for the skin. Good work overall!